Editing Services

First Chapter Developmental Critiques 

$75

 

Hook

Will your first line, page, and chapter hook a reader?

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Scene/Story Structure

Does the story start where it should start?

Are you making promises  from the beginning about what the story entails?

Character

Do I learn who the character is, what they look like, what they want, and what's stopping them in the first chapter?

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Genre Expectations

Can your reader clearly identify the genre of the book based off the first chapter?

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My first chapter services include a 3+ page letter of feedback on your chapter along with in-text commentary. You'll receive suggestions on story issues and writing techniques in order to improve your voice.

 

 

I work professionally for Eschler Editing. For other editing services, please hire me through Eschler Editing.

Blogging 

$80/per 1000 words

I have written over a hundred articles for various local and national blogs including The Boy Scout, MemberPress, Voice of Scouting, Daily Herald, and more. 

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